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Post by Bellatrix Lestrange on Mar 9, 2008 15:54:04 GMT
*apparates in the lounge with the usual loud crack* *croaks* Kreacher wantz to inform Mistress that the new Potion is brewed. Kreacher has done it by himself. Kreacher is proud to serve Mistress. Kreacher doesn't like to serve the Master. **Looks down on the elf with distain** Kreacher I would say you were a faithful elf but you left your Mistress and lived with the enemy. How could I believe you have brewed this new potion correctly?
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Kreacher
Servant
True Mistress Bellatrix, Still Obliged To Potter...
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Post by Kreacher on Mar 9, 2008 17:16:37 GMT
**embarassed, croaks**
Mistress, Kreacher does not want to listen to the Master, but Kreacher is oblidged to do that.
*crestfallen*
Mistress, Kreacher will never leave you, Kreacher always said Master was living with filthy friends, and...and...Kreacher always was worried what Mistress will say, but...
*voice dies out*
*croaks again*
Mistress, Kreacher has brewed the potion correctly. Kreacher will never...never...no...Kreahcer is oblidged to Mistress, Kreacher will never make mistakes. Kreacher loves his mistress, Kreacher will fall off the tallest tower if it is not correct. Kreacher is ready at Mistress's service...
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Post by Draco Malfoy on Mar 12, 2008 20:16:37 GMT
((ok trial passed, the posts are very good. Keep it up! ))
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Post by Bellatrix Lestrange on Mar 14, 2008 8:13:35 GMT
Yeah you did very well Kreacher. Very in character. Well done!
Look forward to RP'ing with you soon!
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Post by Antonin Dolohov on Mar 27, 2008 23:45:51 GMT
*walks swiftly through the night making sure to stay hidden in the shadows*
*stops at a old run down bar with the lights on and peers through the window*
*looks up at the sign then says to him self*
"this must be it"
*he takes one last look around the dark streets and walks in the bar*
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Post by Prof. Alexus Hauner on Mar 29, 2008 5:24:45 GMT
*walks into the lounge - looks around at the crowd and sits*
-((- Start the conversation, Antonin -))-
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Post by Antonin Dolohov on Mar 29, 2008 14:08:32 GMT
*walks around and finds himself a set at a table with one other person sitting there*
*after a few minutes He turns to the man and ask politely what his name is*
*he introduces himself*
the names Antonin Dolohov *looks around to see if any one had herd him*
*then says to him*
do you want a drink its on me, I am feeling rather nice today
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Post by Prof. Alexus Hauner on Mar 29, 2008 20:03:22 GMT
*feeling a little low, agrees to the drink*
So, Antonin, how have you been?
*takes a single sip of the drink, making a slow queer sipping noise*
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Post by Antonin Dolohov on Mar 29, 2008 20:42:50 GMT
*takes a gulp of his drink slams it down on the table ,and gives the man a friendly grin*
well I'm fine know things are Finlay starting to change for the better
*watches as his new acquaints takes little sips of his drink then says jokingly*
i see your take it easy
*he gives a small chuckle*
and you self are things looking up for you as well?
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Post by Prof. Alexus Hauner on Mar 29, 2008 21:05:44 GMT
*looks up again,, now with a grinning face*
Well, it has been all well, just that the fire at Hogwarts was just terrifying not to forget that we had to work hard to get over it, but --
*stops and mouths almost immediately, as if he hid something from him*
-- but, there were dementors around too, I heard... They were wandering around the tower where the fire had just spread out...
*waits for a response, as he takes another sip, the expressions now becoming grim*
-((- Umm, Antonin, it would be great, if you check the punctuations - the commas, since it becomes difficult for the readar to differentiate between two different clauses that are actually separated with a comma. -))-
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Post by Antonin Dolohov on Mar 30, 2008 1:07:23 GMT
*gives a sly grin as the man mentionied the fire at Hogwarts*
Shame about that, did they ever find out how was behind that---
*takes another gulp of his drink, gives another grin then finishes*
Misfortune event… and Dementors at Hogwarts how unlike them
*tries to sound concern, notices that mans odd behave and Suspects the man is hiding something*
So what did the ministry have to say about all this? *Gives the man a very suspicious look, takes another gulp*
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Post by Prof. Alexus Hauner on Mar 30, 2008 10:14:15 GMT
-((- Much Better -))- *hides suspicion, and the mouths his words tactfully* Well, I haven't heard anything from the Ministry, but since the Dementors were around too, it has been guessed that it is the work of The Dark Lord * WHY DID HE SPEAK THAT, he wonders*
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Post by Antonin Dolohov on Mar 30, 2008 20:39:08 GMT
*gives the man a quick grins, then puts on a concern look*
*tries not to look happy about the Ministry lack of luck*
Really know the Ministry doesn’t know, just like them all rapped up in nonsense try to keep every one safe, when will they learn that they can’t control every one.
* gives the man a small nod, sighs then finishes the last bit of his drink*
Oh and death eaters at Hogwarts what a...
* He gives a small smile then finishes, coldly*
Misfortune, here I thought Hogwarts was this impenetrable safe hose, guess no where is safe knowadays
*notates the man called voldemort the Dark Lord his suspicions begin to intense*
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Post by Prof. Alexus Hauner on Mar 31, 2008 17:11:35 GMT
-((- Nowadays is a single word - even in the dictionary - 'know a days' is wrong - you even missed to put the asterik (*) after the second action - sorry to be so stringent, but it would be good if you know where you make mistakes Hope you don't mind them... -))- *grins, now overcoming the tense expressions he had put when he spoke 'The Dark Lord' instead of 'You-Know-Who'* *speaks* Ministry doesn't stand any chance against You-Know-Who. *pauses* *adds* By the way, how do you address him? You know whom I mean, don't you?
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Post by Antonin Dolohov on Mar 31, 2008 21:30:27 GMT
*gives the man a look, as is saying I know your hiding something* *grins as he tries to use Legilimency to prom through the mans inner thoughts* Yes that is so, the Dark Lord has become much stronger then before, I don’t think even the famous Harry potter stands chance against him. *he grins with satisfaction at his comment about the boy how once rivaled his master, and how his master had become unremarkable stronger then be for* As you already know I am a supporter of the Dark Lord better to be on the wining side then in his path *he looked at his arm as he talked, he couldn’t help but chuckle, if only he knew who he really was* *grins as he starts to find out what the mans really hiding* You know it’s really rude to keep things from people, you mind sharing with me what you know ( :osorry my bad I was half asleep when I wrote that ,but I went back and fixed it and I double checked this one for mistakes )
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