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Post by Angelique Paquet on Mar 21, 2009 3:23:53 GMT
*Enters the room and heads toward the bar to order a firewhisky*
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Angelique pushed the door to the pub open, the light from the outside shining in. Stepping into the pub, the heavy wooden door swung shut behind her with a bang. Glancing behind herself in surprise, Angelique shook her head and moved towards the bar, intending to order a drink.
((ooc: unsure of how this works exactly, the stuff that I wrote below the dotted line was the stuff I was trying to express in the part above the dotted line. Unless I'm allowed to rp in third person, I think I'll need a bit of help, XD))
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Post by Silvery Bletchley on Mar 21, 2009 14:17:01 GMT
((Hey Angelique. It's okay to write a short paragraph as your introductory post, just to set the scene for your character but for the rest of the rp the shorter version with the asterisks is preferred.  )) |
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Post by Angelique Paquet on Mar 23, 2009 20:27:24 GMT
((oh, alrighty then, thanks!))
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Post by Alastor Moody on Mar 24, 2009 13:04:04 GMT
(If you want help, I can assist you)
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Post by Angelique Paquet on Mar 26, 2009 0:51:26 GMT
((that would be loved, thanks so much! i'm used to rping in paragraph form (third person) so yeah, this will be a change, but i'm definately up for it! =D))
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Post by Alastor Moody on Mar 26, 2009 9:17:40 GMT
((You will be fine, you'll see  Shall we start then? What do you have in mind?)) |
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Post by Angelique Paquet on Mar 26, 2009 22:07:11 GMT
((lol, sure! i was thinking maybe we should just go with the flow and you can tell me if i'm doing something wrong or anything along those lines, XD))
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Post by Alastor Moody on Mar 27, 2009 13:26:44 GMT
((Ok... I will try to help in the best way I can... Want me to start?))
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Post by Angelique Paquet on Mar 29, 2009 3:50:43 GMT
((errr... alrighty, sure!))
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Post by Alastor Moody on Mar 30, 2009 10:28:29 GMT
The Leaky Cauldron, Monday, 31st August...
**Apparates in front of the wizards pub, looks around, the last thing Alastor needed is dark wizards to deal with. "I really could use a drink right now..." He thinks and walks in. His zooming blue eye rolls in all directions as he walks trough the strange looking people around him, that didn't matter to him, after all, he's not that friendly either. Once at the counter, his growl voice echoed trough the pub**
"Good evening Tom..." **takes a seat, his metal leg scratches the front of the counter** "Some Old Ogden's FireWhiskey will do perfectly."
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Dark
Student of the Dark Arts
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Post by Dark on Apr 1, 2009 20:12:21 GMT
Pansy's home April 1st 2009
Pansy sat on her bed. She had her diary in her hand. nothing to write in it so far. Looking out of her window she saw the sky was a beautiful blue. "Never seen a day this wonderful." she sighed. She smiled. "Oh Draco." she said. She new her friends would never come back to her open friendship. He was married now. She smiled. "Well I suppose I better get on the move." she said. She laughed at herself as she put her diary back in the top drawer of her oak desk and locked it with a magical charm. She left her room and closed the door with a soft click.
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Post by Bellatrix Lestrange on Apr 1, 2009 20:29:57 GMT
(Hi Pansy and welcome. What you've written above is great but we don't tend to use paragraph RP on this site. More towards the asterisk style. See here: puremalfoymanor.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=tutorials&action=display&thread=2033Also Draco isn't married either as he is still a relatively young man. Anyway. Copy what I do. Pansy and Bella have already met so we'll go from there.) **Apparates into the Lounge and looks around** **Spots Pansy in the corner and goes up to the young girl** Well, well, well, Miss Parkinson. It has been a while. How are you dear? |
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Post by Dark on Apr 1, 2009 20:37:58 GMT
*Pansy turns around* Mrs Le Strange *She bows* Hows the Dark Lord? *she wanted to know this.* Also is Draco alright I worry about him so.*Ok she was waffling a bit now* Please sit. Can I get you a drink?
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Post by Bellatrix Lestrange on Apr 1, 2009 22:42:22 GMT
(Ok that was a start. Try spacing the lines out a bit like I did. Also Pansy wouldn't ask Bella how that Dark Lord was. It's just not something that Pansy would say. She's very uptight and snobby but knows where her boundries are. Esp with Bella.
Try again and don't waffle. A Slytherin would never waffle)
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Post by Angelique Paquet on Apr 2, 2009 15:38:58 GMT
**Apparates in front of the leaky cauldron, her face set like stone. Shoves her wand into her back pocket as she storms towards the pub, shoving the door open with a bang as she mutters under her breath**
“Stupid....controlling.... father.....”
**Sits down at the bar and snaps her fingers at the bartender.**
“One firewhisky please.”
((ooc: sorry it took so long to reply moody! i didn't realize we couldn't copy/go back in these things so i had to type it up on word and stuff, XD))
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