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Post by Draco Malfoy on Jul 28, 2007 12:22:49 GMT
Much better, though you will need an AV for your character, not a pink heart (is this supposed to be ironic? haha). Application successful. Please read the rules now and then go ahead with making a full character profile. Thanks.
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Post by thepixie on Jul 29, 2007 15:59:39 GMT
Name of character: Harmony Gilstrap Male or female?:Female Blood type*:Half Pixie/Half Witch Occupation of character: Student Age of character:14 Reason for creating new character:I don't have one yet...I used everywhere anyway Which 'side' is character on?: Neither, It depends on what day, most times Dark Background of character:
Harmony is the only daughter of Gabrielle and Jacob Darvey. Her father was a pureblood and her mother, Pixie. Her parents were very different in some ways, but they had one thing in common. They both adored muggles. When Harmony was born,she was forced to use all-muggle equipment and learn their ways. It was one summer, unusually cold, that she learned what she really was. Her uncle, Daaron, was part vampire. He told her what she was, taught her magic, and tried to encourage her to join the dark side. Mind you, she was still only 8, and she needed sometime to think. She thought being a witch was magnicifcent, so much she could do with this one stick called a wand. She made her decision, which was the lgiht side. Her uncle was furious, and killed her parents as punishment. He was sent to azkaban, and she was sent to live with her grandmother, Rose. Her grandfather was very old, with all types of disease. He was the vamipre who went crazy, killed off her grandmother. Harmony had no choice but to run away, for fear she might be the victim of a braindead vampire's homicide. She ran away to a new family, called the Gilstraps. She was reluctant to join the family, for they were on the dark side, and she had laready chosen light. She later realized she wasn't officially light, so she could join the dark. The Gilstraps being the only family willing to let her in, she joined there family with aquiesce. What sections do you want to RP in: Hogwarts...
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Post by Draco Malfoy on Jul 29, 2007 16:12:18 GMT
Application failed due to following:
1.Half pixie blood is not in the options to have.
2. Your background is rather over melodramatic , I think. I can barely follow it! I think you could leave out all the vampire references, since your family is already half pixie or whatever it is you will be changing it to. Not sure if someone would flit from side to side depending on the day. Please choose a side and stick to it.
Please re-submit.
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Post by george on Jul 29, 2007 19:04:02 GMT
Ok, well I tried to create a new account, but it won't let me enter my birthdate, so I'll actually create the account as soon as possible. Its just I typed this all up, and I want to post it without having to save it on a file. So yea. Here's my death eater character. Feel free to make me change whatever you want.
Name of character: Kreg Montier
Male or female?: Male
Blood type*: half vampire/half wizard
Occupation of character** : Death Eater
Age of character: Was changed at 29 (Over 300)
Reason for creating new character: I am creating this new character because sometimes I just don't want to play the twins and i'm in a 'bad' mood. And plus the site is asking for more characters so I decided to create a death eater.
Which 'side' is character on?: Well, he's a death eater...
Background of character:(This is from another HP site, so I dunno if it'll suit this one. Let me know if it doesn't!) Kreg Montier was born in the 1500’s as to a Janet and Miller Montier. His family was a rich and powerful influence in England, and he grew up in a very strong environment. Having a strong English accent, he eventually came to the ripe ol’ age of 29, having inherited his father’s business; he became one of the most influential men in England.
He married at 25, had two sons, and then one night after his 29th birthday he found himself in an alley, cornered and lost, trying to get to his family. Having heard there screams from a business party, he had bolted immediately and went looking for them. Only the sight that lay before him when they were found was horrid and morbid. Their bodies shredded up and blood, one of his sons throat looked as if it had been ripped out. His other son lay at many parts of the alley, and arm over there, a leg at the opposite corner.
He collapsed to his knees right then and there, holding the bloodied dead corpse of his wife, his love, and began sobbing, blood covered his hands, and he vomited soon after at the horrible sight that was once his family.
Soon after that he had been pinned to the ground by a creature that wasn’t there one moment and then having him pinned to the brick wall the next. The creature before him had fangs, and red eyes that would haunt Kreg for the rest of his life. The woman then dug her fangs into Kreg’s throat, only she didn’t drink him dry, and in return turned him.
Now centuries later here he is. At Hogwarts. Having gained a high up seat with the Dark Lord, and he considers him a strong asset.
He gains information for the Dark Lord. In exchange for power, blood, and money.
What sections do you want to RP in: The Manor mostly, a little at the ministry(to gain info for the Dark Lord if needed), and the other extra places (hogsmeade, diagon alley, etc)
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Post by Draco Malfoy on Jul 29, 2007 19:09:48 GMT
Erm.
Whats with the vampirific murdertastic backgrounds lately, guys?
Lol!
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Post by george on Jul 29, 2007 19:12:48 GMT
Eh, I wrote that awhile ago. I was just too lazy to rewrite a background for this character I just copied and pasted it onto this site from another account. Lol But its ok right?
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Post by Draco Malfoy on Jul 29, 2007 19:19:52 GMT
Hrmm, I'd rather you write out the vampire references and create an original character for this board. You can use the same name. Why is he at Hogwarts? Is he a professor?
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Post by thepixie on Jul 29, 2007 19:35:31 GMT
Name of character: Harmony Gilstrap Male or female?:Female Blood type*:Pure Occupation of character: Student Age of character:14 Reason for creating new character:I don't have one yet...I used everywhere anyway Which 'side' is character on?:Dark Background of character:
Harmony is the only daughter of Gabrielle and Jacob Darvey. Her father was a pureblood and her mother, pure as well. Her parents were very different in some ways, but they had one thing in common. They both adored muggles. When Harmony was born,she was forced to use all-muggle equipment and learn their ways. It was one summer, unusually cold, that she learned what she really was. Her uncle, Daaron, was a dark wizard. He told her what she was, taught her magic, and tried to encourage her to join the dark side. Mind you, she was still only 8, and she needed sometime to think. She thought being a witch was magnificent, so much she could do with this one stick called a wand. She made her decision, which was the light side. Her uncle was furious, and killed her parents as punishment. He was sent to azkaban, and she was sent to live with her grandmother, Rose. Her grandfather was very old, with all types of disease. He went loony, and her grandmother thought it was best that Harmony left. She ran away to a new family, called the Gilstraps. She was reluctant to join the family, for they were on the dark side, and she had already chosen light. She later realized she wasn't officially light, so she could join the dark. The Gilstraps being the only family willing to let her in, she joined there family with aquiesce. What sections do you want to RP in: Hogwarts...
I simplified it...
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Post by Draco Malfoy on Jul 29, 2007 19:41:54 GMT
'She was reluctant to join the family, for they were on the dark side, and she had already chosen light. She later realized she wasn't officially light, so she could join the dark.'
I don't understand that part. I kind of know what you are trying to say but what is she 'wasn't officially light'? If you decide to be a good character, you don't just change like that. Something has to happen for you to change your heart like that. Perhaps you could say that the Gilstraps family influenced her so much that she eventually turned into their way of thinking, since she was young and vunerable?
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Post by Lucius Malfoy on Jul 29, 2007 20:07:05 GMT
I may have one of my turns if I see any more vampires!
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Post by Draco Malfoy on Jul 29, 2007 20:11:59 GMT
*throws garlic at Lucius*
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Post by Lucius Malfoy on Jul 29, 2007 20:15:36 GMT
*makes garlic bread*
*throws at passing vampires*
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Post by thepixie on Jul 29, 2007 21:06:12 GMT
Name of character: Harmony Gilstrap Male or female?:Female Blood type*:Pure Occupation of character: Student Age of character:14 Reason for creating new character:I don't have one yet...I used hereverywhere anyway Which 'side' is character on?:Dark Background of character:
Harmony is the only daughter of Gabrielle and Jacob Darvey. Her father was a pureblood and her mother, pure as well. Her parents were very different in some ways, but they had one thing in common. They both adored muggles. When Harmony was born,she was forced to use all-muggle equipment and learn their ways. It was one summer, unusually cold, that she learned what she really was. Her uncle, Daaron, was a dark wizard. He told her what she was, taught her magic, and tried to encourage her to join the dark side. Mind you, she was still only 8, and she needed sometime to think. She thought being a witch was magnificent, so much she could do with this one stick called a wand. She made her decision, which was the dark side. Her uncle was delighted, but still had no idea what to do about her parents. So, he simply killed them. He was sent to azkaban for being so carelss about it, and she was sent to live with her grandmother, Rose. Her grandfather was very old, with all types of disease. He went loony, and her grandmother thought it was best that Harmony left. She ran away to a new family, called the Gilstraps. She was reluctant to join the family, for they were very rich, and knwon to be annoyingly snotty. She later realized, she had no where to go and accepted their way of life. What sections do you want to RP in: Hogwarts...
I simplified it... -.- o.o -.-
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Post by Draco Malfoy on Aug 1, 2007 16:16:53 GMT
Sorry for the delay in reply. Please go ahead with a full character profile! Thanks.
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Post by thepixie on Aug 1, 2007 22:32:08 GMT
That's Ok. Thank You!
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