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Post by esvisionik on Dec 1, 2009 19:08:25 GMT
Changed a few things, made her talent in Potions much more specific rather than just being 'good' in potions. Hope this helps!
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Post by Lucius Malfoy on Dec 3, 2009 20:56:41 GMT
Thats much better, thank you. Proceed to create your A-Z Profile.
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Post by alessa on Dec 6, 2009 22:39:03 GMT
Have you read MM's Decrees : Yes Reason for wanting non-canon: I'd like to start out with a small character as my first before testing my personality skills with a canon Name of character: Alessa Lombardi Male or female?: Female Blood type: Half Occupation of character: Student Age of character: 17 Which 'side' is character on?: Neutral Very Brief background of character: Her muggle mother moved there from Colorado, America to get married to her father, and decided to stay there, a few years later Alessa was born on December 7th. She was the second daughter for the Lombardi family, and she idolized her sister, Francesca, who was two years her senior. A few months after her seventh birthday, her parents got a divorce, and her mother moved to London, taking Alessa with her. She loved Rome but wanted to go to England. She and her sister remained close despite the distance, but when she was fifteen, they both met Giovanni. He was a pure blood and a player, a womanizer. He began to see both girls romantically, and tore a hole through the two of them. He stopped when he realized how much he loved Francesca however, and he and Alessa became close friends, helping her fix the relationship with her sister. The two of them got married, with Alessa as the maid of Honor. [sorry it's kinda crappy >.<] What sections of the board would you like to RP in? Any that students are allowed in Your level of RP in your estimation: Intermediate/Advanced
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Post by Caius Reppert on Dec 7, 2009 19:00:05 GMT
Name: Caius Morpheus Reppert Meaning: Caius- "rejoice" Morpheus- "God of Dreams" Reppert- "counsel"
Reason: I wanna get the hang of Malfoy Mansion's style. Perhaps one day I'll create a canon player
Gender: Male Blood: Pureblood
Occupation: Professional Quidditch Player. Started playing with the Appleby Arrows, but transfered to the Sweetwater AllStars (USA), but moved back to the UK and is currently playing for the Falmouth Falcons.
Age: currently 21 Side: He only serves the Dark Lord
Biography: Caius was born on November 22 to parents Oliver Reppert and Elisabeth Théry. At an early age, it was instilled upon him that wizards that came from a "dirty" family and muggle wizards were a disgrace to the wizarding world. When Caius was 3, his parents had another child named Ophiuchus. Their father, Oliver, worked in the Ministry with Lucius Malfoy, but was also a DeathEater. Their mother, Elisabeth, was and still is a stay at home mother.
When Caius was 11, he received his acceptance letter into Hogwarts. Upon arriving, he was promptly sorted into Slytherin. In his first year, he became great friends with Draco Malfoy, Pansy Parkinson, Daphne Greengrass, just to name a few. In his second year, Caius became very interested in Quidditch and joined the team that year. He first started out as a chaser but as the years went by, he proved to be a better beater. In his 7th year at Hogwarts, Caius was picked to be the Slytherin House Quidditch captain. During the final battle at Hogwarts, Oliver Reppert was killed in battle and Caius's brother lost his arm. However, Caius was not severely harmed, but does have a few battle wounds.
Out of school, Caius was given offers from professional Quidditch teams. He settled with the Appleby Arrows, and played as a starter chaser. He remained their for 3 years, but offered a job with the Sweetwater All-Stars in the United States. He remained with them for only 6 months, because he severly hated Americans... especially redneck wizards and moved back to the UK. When he returned, his agent booked him to tryout with the Falmouth Falcons. He was given the job and has been currently playing as their right beater. He has the third highest salary on the team.
Unfortunately, during an fierce game against Puddlemere United, a Puddlemere beater hit Caius with his beater, causing him to be knocked off his broom. The fall caused serious damage to his back. His back was not severely damaged, but enough to put him on leave. He still needed a job while he recovered from surgery.With help from family friends, they were gracious enough to help him get a job in the Ministry as a Quidditch scout. He'd only have the job however until he was strong enough to get back on a broom
Sections: The Reppert family is very close to the Malfoys. Since Caius is a Quidditch player, he travels quite a bit.
My Level of RPing is about intermediate. I just started RPing this year, but I'm a fast learner and I have learned a lot this year!
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Post by Silvery Bletchley on Dec 10, 2009 20:20:21 GMT
Alessa. Your application is interesting but it doesn't say a whole lot about her personality. I would like to know more about the character herself...what type of person she is, what are her goals and/or ambitions, her loyalties, etc... Thanks. Caius...You have created a really good character but unfortunately the only non-canons being accepted at the moment are Hogwarts students or Ministry officials. Do you think perhaps you could make him a bit older and say he is a retired pro-Quidditch player and now works at the Ministry? You could choose to be law enforcer, hit wizard, auror, etc... But most importantly, we need you to read MM's Decrees. Thanks a bunch.
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Post by delilahmarie on Dec 11, 2009 1:28:12 GMT
Have you read MM's Decrees : Yes. Reason for wanting non-canon: None of the cannon characters really interested me, unfortunately… Name of character: Delilah Marie Locklear Male or female?: She’s a female. Blood type: Since you mentioned there’s an overflow of purebloods, I suppose I’ll settle for halfblood. Occupation of character: Law Enforcer Age of character: 19 Which 'side' is character on?: The light side… haha. Very Brief background of character:
Delilah Marie Locklear was born to her muggle French mother Jacqueline Cecile Dubois and pureblood British father Geoffrey Michael Locklear in Bayonne, France on August 2nd, 2003 (I believe that’s correct). Although she is an only child, she has several cousins on both sides of the family. The Locklears continued to live in Bayonne up until Delilah turned seven. Therefore, she is accustomed to the French language, foods, and traditions.
After Delilah’s seventh birthday, the family relocated to Liverpool, England to tend to her widowed grandmother, Penelope Locklear. Delilah would spend hours at a time, telling her grandmother inventive stories of seventeenth century muggle women and pureblood wizards that were engrossed in forbidden love. The pair formed a close bond.
Soon after however, her grandmother died from a severe case of Dragon Pox. The entire Liverpool estate belonging to the Locklear family, according to Penelope’s will, was surprisingly left to Delilah. Often on holiday, Delilah visits Penelope Locklear’s grave and continues to tell her stories.
Delilah graduated from Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry as a Ravenclaw Alumni. Although an aspiring writer, Delilah decided to pursue a career in Magical Law Enforcement. One day, she hopes to put the experiences she gains from such a lustrous career into a series of novels.
What sections of the board would you like to RP in? Hm, wherever my character fits in I suppose.
Your level of RP in your estimation: Experienced. I’m 19 now, I’ve been role playing since I was 12
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Post by Silvery Bletchley on Dec 11, 2009 18:45:56 GMT
Hello delilah. Could you please adjust your character's age to a number a bit more appropriate for a law enforcer? I don't believe she'd be any younger than 24 or so. I also noticed that her birthdate needs correcting as well, if you're not sure what year it should be then just omit it and only specify the day and month along with her age. Thanks.
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Post by Rebecca Angel on Dec 13, 2009 17:51:54 GMT
Have you read MM's Decrees :Yes Reason for wanting non-canon: Just to do my own character. Name of character: Barty`s Angel Male or female?: Female Blood type: Pureblood Occupation of character: Reflexologist Age of character: 21 Which 'side' is character on?: Voldamorts Very Brief background of character: Been lost for a long time in a forest....needs somone. What sections of the board would you like to RP in? any. i don`t mind. Your level of RP in your estimation: n/a
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Post by Lucius Malfoy on Dec 13, 2009 20:51:34 GMT
Ok. Make sure that you have read the decrees properly. They're not meant for skim reading.
Your character will likely need a proper name rather than a nick name. You should also check with our Barty if you want to be involved with him.
Your history needs to be a bit more in depth as well before we accept you.
I notice that you have started RPing already. We would rather that you wait until we accept the character first.
Your signature and picture are a bit big. Could you shrink the profile pic, and maybe rearrange the signature to fit better?
Your level of RP is n/a. So I assume you mean beginner? That is fine. We welcome all levels, just try to get an idea of how the site works. Maybe you should get in touch with a mentor.
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Post by Caius Reppert on Dec 14, 2009 1:07:13 GMT
Hey! I fixed some of my stuff! I hope its acceptable!
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Post by Silvery Bletchley on Dec 14, 2009 2:03:12 GMT
Hmm, your changes are better...But I don't think that the Ministry does any Quidditch scouting per se, that would be up to the individual teams. He would probably be working for the Dept. of Magical Games and Sports, so why don't you do a bit of internet research and see what kinds of positions offered by them may appeal to you. Also...did you ask Lucius Malfoy for permission before affiliating yourself with him and his family? It is only proper, no? And most importantly...have you read MM's Decrees yet?
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Post by Caius Reppert on Dec 14, 2009 2:28:10 GMT
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Post by Silvery Bletchley on Dec 14, 2009 3:49:56 GMT
Are you sure that's an official HP info site?
The HPL (Harry Potter Lexicon) only mentions the British and Irish Quidditch League Headquarters, the Official Gobstones Club, and the Ludicrous Patents Office as divisions of the Department of Magical Games and Sports. Nothing further is mentioned, but perhaps the League and not the individual teams are in charge of the scouting. How about we leave it at that and let you go on with a full profile? We can ask our Oracle for help in the subject after that.
Are you sure you have read the Decrees in their entirety? There is an important instruction within them that you seem to have missed.
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Post by Caius Reppert on Dec 14, 2009 4:47:31 GMT
I'm a little confused on what you mean? If you are talking abut the siggie, I'll remove it. I just figured since my profile was nearly complete I could add him. And I have read them.
AND YES it is a real site. So am I done?
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Post by Rebecca Angel on Dec 14, 2009 18:11:37 GMT
I do apologise! I really do. I`m so sorry for not making you understand. I am not new to Rp...i mean n/a as in, i do not get what the question means. But `il start again. I`m sorry. Have you read MM's Decrees :I have. and i will read it again and again if i don`t get it lol. Reason for wanting non-canon: Having a new character of my own experience this site. Name of character: Rebecca Crouch (Bartys angel ) I want to be involved with Barty if that is possible. Male or female?: Female Blood type: Pureblood or half-blood. if it does not make sense. Occupation of character: Reflexologist Age of character: 21 Which 'side' is character on?: it is ment to be a secret. But she may be on Voldamorts if Barty wants her to. Very Brief background of character: A woman who has had a history with Barty, she loved him and now has lost him. She never knew what happened to him and now she is finding him. Rebecca (my character) is a lonely woman who has lost her family and wants some company. so she is now lost in a dark forest begining her search for Barty. She does not know if she is pureblood or half-blood yet (will find out or admin can set it) And that leads to her getting in danger. If you need any other information just please tell me what i`m doing wrong I have done my profile pic and signature for you Also, if there is a Barty on here? can i please be invloved as you did say . thankyou.
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