Applying for Non-Canon (limited)

[phoenixblack]

Have you read MM's Decrees : YES

Reason for wanting non-canon: PHOENIX IS MY MAIN CHARACTER FOR PREVIOUS SITES. I AM MORE COMFORTABLE WITH USING HER SINCE I HAVE HER BACKGROUND AND PERSONALITY DOWN.

Name of character: PHOENIX BLACK

Male or female?: FEMALE

Blood type: PUREBLOOD

Occupation of character STUDENT

Age of character: 16

Which 'side' is character on?: UNDECIDED

Very Brief background of character: PHOENIX IS THE SECOND CHILD OF THOMAS AND ARIANNA BLACK (NO RELATION TO THE BLACK FAMILY.) SHE HAS AN OLDER BROTHER NAMED ANTHONY WHO IS 18 AND LIVING IN THE UNITED STATES. WHEN PHOENIX WAS SEND OFF TO HER FIRST YEAR OF SCHOOL (ANTHONY'S THIRD) HER PARENTS WERE KILLED IN AN ATTACK ON THEIR HOME. ANTHONY AND PHOENIX WERE SENT TO THEIR MOTHERS HOME IN THE STATES WITH FAMILY THAT THEY BARELY KNEW. SINCE PHOENIX WAS THE ONE THAT FOUND HER PARENTS AT THEIR HOME WHEN THEY RETURNED SHE HAS BEEN HAUNTED BY THE NEIGHTMARES SINCE.
ANTHONY AND HERSELF GREW MIRE DISTANT AS THE YEARS PASSED AND HE KNOW LIVES IN THEIR OLD MANSION BY HIMSELF. THEY HARDLY EVER TALK AND SHE HAS SINCE WISHED TO AVENGE HER PARENTS DEATH..

Your level of RP in your estimation: Intermediate/Advanced

[Draco Malfoy]

Hi Phoenix,

1. Please do not write in capitals. The only exception is if you are RPing and your character is shouting.

2. Your BG is very confusing. It appears you've written your character's residence to be the states. We only have UK locations at Malfoy Mansion.

ANTHONY AND PHOENIX WERE SENT TO THEIR MOTHERS HOME IN THE STATES WITH FAMILY THAT THEY BARELY KNEW

3. If your character is 'american', please amend this as we are currently disallowing American students.

Application denied. Please re-apply with a more clearly written background, lower case sentences and using spell and grammar checks for another consideration if you are still interested.

A sample of your RP might be necessary as you put yourself fairly high up the scale of standards of roleplayers but yet the BG of your character barely makes sense and this is quite an important measurement for a good quality player/character.

[Angelique Blackthorn]

Have you read MM's Decrees : Yes i have read the MM's Decrees
Reason for wanting non-canon: Because i like the idea of a non canon Character
Name of character: Angelique Eris Blackthorn
Male or female?: Female
Blood type: Pure Blood
Occupation of character:Ex student
Age of character: 19
Which 'side' is character on?: Death Eater's side
Very Brief background of character: Angelique is the teenage daughter of Shaula & Raphael Blackthorn.a Couple of Death Eater's who was in Azkaban at the time of Angelique's birth.so a Ministry official took Angelique to live at a Orphanage in the Muggle World.One day a Letter came for Ang & she got herself to Hogwarts,where she got accepted into Slytherin.

She played a bit of Quidditch but didn't make the team,must to her disgust.Ang hang out with the popular slytherin's & she managed to do a bit of torment without being caught for a while,but then she got caught one day so she doesn't torment as much.

Angelique left Hogwarts after her 6th year at Hogwarts.with O & W in her O.W.Ls exams.Ang lives by herself in a small apartment in Hogsmeade & she doesn't know if her parents are still alive or dead from dementors.
What sections do you want to RP in: Diagon Alley,Hogwarts,Hogsmeade
Your level of RP in your estimation: about intermediate

[Draco Malfoy]

Hello,
It appears you have not read the Decrees properly, please could you read them again more carefully?
Thanks.

Aside from that, there has been no reference of a daughter of those 2 characters here at MM since we started so you may have to make her completely non-canon. We are also not accepting non canon DEs at the moment. However will leave that to the decision of the players of those characters and we might be able to reach a compromise.

Thanks and welcome.

[Angelique Blackthorn]

I have done the fix ups If that is what your after

[Draco Malfoy]

Cool... any chance of making her Ravenclaw? Sorry! Only because we have loads of Slytherins but hardly any other house and we're trying to even it out. It's much better though. I don't think Auror's guarded Azkaban at the time - only Dementors - perhaps you could say a Ministry Official came and took her away from there at birth?

However, I can't let you proceed because I am not sure you have read the Decrees (there's an instruction in there you haven't done yet )

[Silvery Bletchley]

And another thing. If she's a student she would live at Hogwarts, not in a flat in Hogsmeade.

[Angelique Blackthorn]

Done the fix ups,i made her a Ex Slytherin & i did the task in the decress

[Silvery Bletchley]

Alright Angelique, you can go ahead with a full profile but since you decided to not make her a student you are now going to have to choose a profession for her. You know, give her some direction. You can use this thread here as a guide.

Or...you could make her a student again, just not a Slythie.

[izurox]

Have you read MM's Decrees : yes
Reason for wanting non-canon: I don't feel I could really play a cannon character I have trouble working within guidelines that have already been set, also this way I can get into the forum before I work with a cannon character.
Name of character: Adorée Cydney Blanc
Male or female?: female
Blood type: halfblood
Occupation of character: seer/auror
Age of character: 27
Which 'side' is character on?: the winning side
Very Brief background of character: Shortly after Adorée was born her mother, a witch, faked her death leaving her muggle husband and ran off with a wizard. Adorée's father, Astor Blanc, knew nothing of the magical world that engulfed his own. He only found out when Adorée started acting very strange as a child. She would go into trances and come out of them like nothing happened. Astor used to take her to the finest hospitals in France thinking she went into comas but after all the tests the doctors did on little Adorée they only found that she had more brain activity then most children which was nothing medically wrong. Finally Astor ignored the unusual trance like states and when on like life was normal. But life wasn’t normal. On Adorée’s 13th birthday, while her father and she were living in London, she received a letter by owl from Hogwarts witchcraft and wizardry. That was when her life began. She had been a Ravenclaw in Hogwarts and done so well that she ended up as an Auror with the Ministry of Magic with her seeing abilities.

What sections do you want to RP in: ?
Your level of RP in your estimation:Beginner/Intermediate

[Lucius Malfoy]

Hello,
Just a few minor details to consider:

- what's the context of 'the winning side' ? At the moment, it may be considered that Voldemort's side is winning in the current climate of the World in Malfoy Mansion. Therefore if you were working for the Ministry, you wouldn't actually be on the 'winning side'. Please choose a more specific alignment that is appropriate to your occupation/character. ie. the Ministry or Order of the Phoenix (and specify if you want to be a member of OoTP or just affiliated to them).

- I'm not entirely sure the trances/high brain activity are exclusive symptoms of children with magical blood? Many Muggle children go into trance-like states ie. might be an 'absence seizure' which is more common in children with epilepsy, or sleep deprivation. Perhaps choose a symptom more exclusive to magical blood?

- The letter from Hogwarts would have arrived on your 11th birthday rather than your 13th.

she ended up as an Auror with the Ministry of Magic with her seeing abilities.

-Just wanted to check that if you want to be an Auror then you are trained to fight against Dark Wizards & involved in criminal investigation, rather than just having a passive 'Seer' role as such? Please make it clear in your full profile that you use your Seeing abilities as an advantage in your Aurorship and to the advantage of the other Aurors but please make sure this doesn't become 'god-moding/powerplaying' in the main plots.

Thanks.

[Camy Blackwood]

Reason for wanting character: I want an adult character, I have a student but would like an adult.
Name of character: Camy Blackwood
Male or female?: Female
Blood type: (choose from list below) Pureblood
Occupation of character (choose from list below) Auror
Age of character: 21
Which 'side' is character on?: Good
Very Brief background of character: Camy had went to Hogwarts, she was a Gryffindor, her parents were both Ministry workers. Her father was an Auror and thats where she got the idea of being one herself. Camy had always stuck up for people that was being bullied, after getting out of Hogwarts with the right grades she started learning how to be an Auror.
What sections do you want to RP in: Any

[Draco Malfoy]

Seems fine, please create full profile. Even though she's probably completed her training, I'd say she'd still be under the 'care' of a more experienced Auror during any major tasks I imagine, so keep that in mind. Thanks!

[Roslyn Levere]

Reason for wanting non-canon: I'd like to make my own character, because it's fun to make new characters with new personalities.
Name of character: Roslyn Amora Levere
Male or female?: Female
Blood type: Pureblood
Occupation of character (choose from list below) : Shopkeeper ( Flourish and Blotts)
Age of character: 20
Which 'side' is character on?: Neutral (Only loyal to her family
Very Brief background of character: Roslyn's father was born in France, her Mother born in England. Her parents sent for him, when she was sixteen to have an arranged marriage take place, which they had agreed to before the two were even born.

Soon the two fell in love, and Amiela ( Roslyn's mother) gave birth to a baby girl. She died while giving birth, causing Roberto and the family to fall into depression, little Roslyn too young to understand. Much too grief stricken to function, and having no will to raise his daughter alone, Roberto left Rose only months after her mother death, to be cared for by her Grandparents, his own family wanting nothing to do with her, They and Robert moved back to France. Years passed, without Rose knowing anything of her past, except that her mother had died giving birth.

When she turned eleven, Roslyn was accepted into Hogwarts, and sorted into the house of Ravenclaw. There she spent her years with her head buried in books, advancing her sharp mind. Then graduated with flying colors. After a quest of looking for her father, and finding him (Whom she'd found out actually abandoned her, during her thirteenth birthday when her grandparents finally told her the truth.) At age 18, Roslyn applied for a job at Flourish and Blotts in diagon alley and became the shop keepers assistant. A year later, at age 19 she moved out of her Grandparents house, into her own in Hogsmeade. She also was moved up to Shop Keeper.

Having always known of the Malfoy's , but never being anything more than associates, Rose couldn't help her growing curiosity of them. They seemed to be a secretive bunch, and she knew it was none of her business, but she wondered exactly what it was they were hiding.

One day, curiosity became too much, and she decided to find Malfoy manor. She wasn't sure where it was located, only that it was somewhere in Wiltshare (information she'd gather from over hearing Crabb and Goyle once at Hogwarts). So taking her Firebolt, she set off in search of the manor.

Flying for hours, and constantly needing to land and rest, Roslyn was ready to give up all hope, until she finally spotted the large manor, only assuming it belonged to the Malfoy's by the initials MM on the gate. Hesitating, she walked to the gate, and knocked softly.

What sections do you want to RP in: Doesn't matter.
Your level of RP in your estimation: Advanced.

[Araminta Meliflua]

Hi Roslyn, welcome to Malfoy Mansion!

Do you think you could read and post in the decrees so you're aware of the guidelines and we know you've read them please!
Once you've done that we can approve your profile here and then you can create a proper profile page and join the fun